Step by step


Author’s Note: This is the fourth chapter of a six part story. If you would like to read the previous chapters, please visit Chapter 1 – The key, Chapter 2 – Plus one, and Chapter 3 – The seed.

With the sun hastily sinking below the horizon, Damon slipped the acorn into his pocket, giving it a small caress as a sign of appreciation for the wisdom it had recently bestowed upon him. He draped the brass skeleton key around his neck and placed the parchment back into the soil covered box that had just been discovered in a concealed burrow. Together with Jo, a waitress that he had befriended at a roadside diner less than forty-eight hours ago, Damon retraced his steps to his truck in the parking area. Gryffin, Damon’s loyal golden retriever, was following closely behind.

“What do you think those numbers mean?” asked Jo, referring to the three inscriptions on the parchment below the quote about new beginnings.

Damon knew the exact meaning of the first two numbers. Like the previous set of digits etched on the key now hanging around his neck, the numbers were coordinates to a new location, north and east of their present location. The third message etched below the first two, 811 E42F – 26, left both Jo and Damon befuddled.

Damon’s night vision had always been suspect. He had made every effort in the past to restrict his driving to daylight hours. This was one time when he was happy to have made an exception.

“Jo, would you mind driving us back into town. I’m not all that comfortable with night driving, especially on these mountain switchbacks,” Damon pleaded.

“Sure, no problem,” responded Jo. She had responded without really thinking, as if she was in some sort of hypnotic daze. Her thoughts were obviously elsewhere. Damon wondered where her preoccupied musings were leading Jo.

Damon had a secondary reason for asking Jo to drive. The night blindness pretext was just a veil to conceal his real motivation. He knew that Jo was on the cusp of diverging from their joint venture once they reached the base of the mountain. She had hitched a ride with him from her hometown in rural Virginia to locate her ex-boyfriend who had relocated – with a good chunk of her money – to the town just outside the park boundaries. Having Jo behind the wheel would put her in the driver’s seat, both literally and figuratively.

The signature chime originating from the dash of the truck spoiled Damon’s well laid plan. “Looks like you better get some gas when we get back into town,” offered Jo.

And just like that, the ball was back in Damon’s court. He wasn’t encouraged by her use of the word you instead of we. Maybe she would just grab a taxi from the gas station and disappear from his life in pursuit of her original objective. The thought of how he was going to handle the situation left him feeling quite awkward. He felt something more than a superficial companionship in Jo’s presence. He wasn’t ready for their newfound friendship to dissolve so quickly, but he didn’t want to appear desperate for asking what he really wanted – for her to accompany him on the next leg of his journey. As it turned out, Jo made the decision for him.

mountain-switchback“That quote, the one you found on that piece of paper,” began Jo. “It’s really made me think.” She carefully kept her eyes on the road ahead of her. With the road curving left and right every couple hundred feet, it was a prudent decision. However, she was doing so more because she wasn’t ready for the rejection that may come with her next request.

“I’ve always been one to go with my gut, and the quote on that paper you just discovered about new beginnings was a wakeup call. There’s something inside telling me that I should continue travelling with you, and forget about whatever story is unfolding as a result of my past decisions … if you will have me.”

Damon couldn’t help but smile, just a little bit. “It wasn’t I who discovered that piece of paper, it was we,” responded Damon. And right on cue, as if to take partial credit for the discovery, Gryffin echoed a bark of approval from the back seat. “And you are certainly more than welcome to join me. In fact, I would rather like that.”

With the emotional distractions resolved, Damon’s attention returned to the logistics of the hours that followed. “Maybe we can find a couple hotel rooms in town, get some rest, and start fresh in the morning?”

“Where to, though?” asked Jo.

“I think maybe we should find a hotel with a business center. With access to a computer, we can figure out where these coordinates are leading us,” responded Damon.

Upon reaching the outskirts of town, Jo pulled into the parking lot of a gas station with a convenience store attached to it. While Damon began to fill up the truck, Jo headed inside to get some local knowledge on a good place to stay for the night.

When he had finished topping off the tank, Damon had noticed that Jo had yet to return from inside the store. He gave Gryffin a reassuring scruff behind the ears, uttered “Be right back buddy”, and headed for the front door. Inside, Jo was at the front counter with a pre-wrapped sandwich, bag of chips, and soda.

“I thought maybe we could get a bite to eat and brainstorm about that last number,” interjected Damon before she passed her money over to the clerk. He wasn’t quick enough. Jo had already paid, but she responded back, “It’s not for me.”

“It’s for the guy sitting on the curb outside,” she continued.

homeless-signDamon hadn’t seen anyone outside. Who exactly was she talking about? As he craned his neck to see out the front window, he now noticed the disheveled man huddled over on the curb. Am I that oblivious to the world around me? thought Damon. He was slightly embarrassed, at himself at least, that he had filtered another human being out of the equation of his life so easily.

While contemplating these thoughts, he didn’t realize that Jo was already exiting the store. “You coming?” came Jo’s voice with one foot already out the front door. Following her over to the curb, Damon watched as Jo leaned down and offered the man her purchases. It would have been a mere snack to Jo or Damon. To this gentleman, however, it appeared to be a feast. And although the only two words that emerged from his mouth were “Thank you”, the genuine look in his eyes spoke a thousand words of gratitude.

“There’s a small hotel, up ahead on the right. The guy inside said it looks sorta like a dive, but it’s a great deal and they are pet friendly. And yes, they have a computer,” smiled Jo as they returned to the truck.

Sitting at the hotel computer, each was digging into a carton of take-out shrimp lo mein. “You know,” voiced Jo between bites, “I had a different idea in mind when I said I’d like seafood for dinner.”

Damon stirred through the sea of noodles with his wooden chopsticks, searching for the sparse shrimp which evidently had all been consumed. “Yeah, I’m right there with you. I guess beggars can’t be choosers. Seafood and mountains don’t necessarily fit in the same sentence now, do they?”

Placing his uneaten portion on the table next to the computer, Damon looked over at Jo who had found one last shrimp, and offered, “If we ever get the chance, I’ll treat you to some proper seafood.”

“Promise?” grinned Jo. Without hesitation, Damon responded with his own smile, “Yep, I promise.” Returning to the business at hand, Damon punched the new set of coordinates into the browser’s search engine. It felt like turning that brass key again, opening another treasure box.

welcome-to-dcThe map on the screen contained many familiar landmarks. It was obvious where they would be headed next – Washington, D.C. More specifically, the exact coordinates pinpointed a particular building in the District of Columbia – the public library. It was at that point in time, almost simultaneously, that both Damon and Jo looked at each other and shared a collective chortle of recognition. They immediately understood the meaning behind the third inscription on that parchment.

Author’s Note: This is the fourth part of a six part “not-so-short” short story about self-discovery. A new segment will be published each Wednesday in December with the closing chapter being posted on the first Wednesday of 2015. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment – best wishes for an inspired day and new year!


13 thoughts on “Step by step

  1. Writing to Freedom December 24, 2014 / 12:45 pm

    Their blossoming relationship is touching and I can’t wait to see what they’re up to in my hometown of DC. Beautiful photo too.
    Thanks for sharing your gift for writing and touching emotional chords Dave. I’m glad to know you and your writing. Happy Holidays!

    • davecenker December 24, 2014 / 3:40 pm

      Thank you Brad, the feelings are very mutual as far as knowing you and your writing 🙂 The ironic thing is that I have had the first draft for all six parts to this story written for several weeks. When you responded in the last post about your hometown being D.C,, I almost felt compelled to drop a spoiler your way – but, I resisted the urge 😉

      There is a clue as to what Damon and Jo are going to be up to in D.C. – part of it is in the beginning of this story, and part of it is near the end. Being able to sprinkle clues along the way is so fun as an author – I feel like a little elf 😉

      I am happy that you are enjoying the story and hope that the final two editions stir the emotions that I hope they will 😉 Have a wonderful Christmas Brad!

  2. Writing to Freedom December 24, 2014 / 4:12 pm

    Thanks for keeping the surprise. I like mysteries and stirred emotions, at least in other people’s stories. XD 🙂 Cheers!

  3. balroop2013 December 24, 2014 / 7:03 pm

    Hi Dave,

    A good combination of adventure and relationship, slowly unfolding. I guess you keep changing your story, probably to assimilate the new ideas that keep dawning? I have no clue where this story is going…yes! I know that proves one thing very clearly – you are a versatile writer, keeping the mysteries up your sleeve, which is the trait of a good story teller. I can say Joe and Damon have found the best of friends in each other…rest is all an enigma!! It would be interesting to know what lies ahead…

    • davecenker December 25, 2014 / 8:22 pm

      Hi Balroop, thank you very kindly for your comments. A combination of adventure and relationship is a good description of this story 😉 Ultimately, this is a story of self-discovery, not only for Damon, but for Jo also. Sometimes, it is in what is not written that we find the deepest meaning 😉 Thank you for taking the time to read and best wishes for an inspired holiday season and new year!

  4. heraldmarty December 26, 2014 / 1:05 pm

    Ah, I’m smiling and so glad Jo decided to hang in there with Damon, though mystery buff that I am I still get the feeling there are a few secrets to be revealed about Jo. Gosh it’s been 10 years since my last trip to DC so I’m looking forward to seeing where this leg of the journey leads them. Loving this story Dave! 🙂

    • davecenker December 26, 2014 / 1:43 pm

      Thank you Marty, I am so happy to hear that others are enjoying this story as much as I am 🙂 It has actually been difficult for me to develop any future stories because I have been so engrossed in the lives of Damon and Jo – on to D.C. and who knows where else 😉

      Thanks again, as always, for taking the time to read and comment. It means so much to be able to share this story with others 🙂

  5. Dalo 2013 December 28, 2014 / 2:45 am

    Another great installment ~ Jo sounds great, you have built her mystery & character very well! I’m trying to imagine what lies ahead, but way too many paths ~ which is also a testament to your writing. Looking forward to the next 🙂

    • davecenker December 30, 2014 / 8:37 pm

      Thank you Randall, I sincerely appreciate your kind sentiments. It has been a true pleasure to be able to share this story with others. The emotions felt by each of these characters (Gryffin included) tug at my strings in their own unique and influential way. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, it is very much appreciated 🙂

  6. Eric Tonningsen December 29, 2014 / 12:30 am

    I’m with you and your characters, Dave, much the same way I am with Dan Brown’s stories — especially The DaVinci Code. Enjoying the ride, perhaps as much as Gryffin. 🙂 And while tangential, I like how you wove “Am I that oblivious to the world around me?” into Damon’s consciousness.

    • davecenker December 30, 2014 / 8:34 pm

      Thank you Eric, I also have enjoyed Dan Brown also, specifically The DaVinci Code, The Lost Symbol, and most recently Inferno. It’s amazing how different genres of fiction can lead us down different investigative paths within ourselves.

      And as far as your reference to the tangential question, I know I have asked that of myself on several occasions, even if it doesn’t come out audibly 😉 Thank you for taking the time to read Eric, I always look forward to your insightful comments 🙂

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